Hmm…the page kept logging me in as Chalo but wouldn’t let me post until I went Previous and Next.
There it is. Mora may not be the deepest person ever but she has heart. And that’s why she’s been given all the breaks Ms. “Alejandra Coldthorn”. I sure hope things can start to heal now. I’ve lived through that situation and it is no fun to fight your old friends.
She needs to make up her mind.
I love how they are taking turns taking the piss out of each other
This will be… problematic.
I read that in Mordin Solus’s voice for some reason.
It’s impossible for anyone who knows Mass Effect 2 to do otherwise.
Wow. Now we really see how Mora has developed. And proves, o0nce and for all, that she is not a Mary Sue.
I have to admit I’m disappointed…
this ended up rather cliche, at least in my opinion.
Whoever said we were at the end?
this i very clieche.
I’m not sure if I understand, but maybe someone can tell me? Who, exactly, is Mora a Mary-Sue of? I can’t think of any other character(s) who shares her exact same traits and personality and backstory…..
Mary-sue is a trope, character that seem to be perfect, that always win and fans hate her for that.
Mora had lot of good things going for, dispite all the bad things she done. So people are linking her to a Mary-Sue type character.
As a fan, I don’t hate her for being a Mary-sue. I find it irritating, but I hate her because she uses people for her own gain and apparently it’s okay since she considers them friends now. The majority of her time is spent sleeping with Minos, not exactly the trophy hard worker the Primes rewarded her for being. So she has a nice heart, I’m sure there’s lots of childish sluts who do. She is beginning to show some growth, but it’s seriously long overdue.
she isn´t a Mary-Sue of someone, the term Mary-Sue is used to describe a character a creator always write to win, often used as a negative term to describe character that never or rarely face challenges, and when he/she do face them they solve it with seaming no long term consequences.
Hench Mora been getting kinda tagged that since she started out deep in trouble and going nowhere but up, frankly mostly due to high up friends and sugar sweet power of friendship. Me I wouldn´t go so far, but then again, how many plot arc problems have she solved with her own bare hands? So to speak…not any I can think of to be honest.
If Alej will think that Mora is pitying her… oh boy
So that’s it… that’s the whole reason why Patches was mad at Mora? I’m sorry, but the way Chalo built it up I thought there was going to be more.
Nope. Simple jealousy is all.
There’s nothing simple about a long simmering, resentful jealousy. On the other hand, hopefully Alej can remember once again that Mora has always loved her as a sister and a friend, and if Alej can forgive her she will always be there for here.
This is not a case of simple jealousy. I think this is more of a case of Mora leaving Momma Linda (the closest thing that Alej had as a parent) to die alone. That and Mora uses people to get what she wants (or use to anyway). If there is anything else from the past between these two, I don’t know. We will have to wait for Chalo with the final word.
Well now this isn’t over not by a long shot. I believe that Mora Might Summon Digit from her Bracelet
To show Alej exactly what that spirit stone is all about, and perhaps make her understand what it truly means to have one of those
I’m betting all that resentment’s not good for the Spirit.
I think it’s time that all that negative Competition energy is channeled into a more Positive kind…maybe that’ll awake the Nanospirit?
Of course, with all the negative emotions it’s probably been feeding on around Alej, the Spirit will probably be like the Anti-Digit XD
I wouldn’t put it as straight negativity is the problem. Remember, Tiare was logical, ice-cold when she wanted to be, somewhat childish around Miles… not to the extreme that Alej is being to Mora, but her lifestyle doesn’t seem to be much -happier-. Yet Era came out being pleasant, helpful, formal, with a pleasant disposition. Sure, Alej probably is keeping her spirit scared with her outright anger and jealousy, but the thing wouldn’t have woken up if it was sure Alej had a heart of pure ice.
Bleh. Those Digital Spirits are more trouble than they’re worth. And at this point, I have no idea where Chalo, ID Fox or SD Kat are even going with this but it’s feeling… bland.
This just didn’t feel like the outcome I was expecting with last week’s episode. It feels like they set up for an m80 and all that went off was a fire-cracker.
I agree, I’m getting that feeling too :/
Stop dragging it on chowderheads.
“Well I’m not going anywhere until you accept my offer to help!”
“Well I’m not going anywhere until you take that gem with you and leave!”
Spirit Gem: “Oh for Heaven’s sake: MAKE OUT ALREADY!”
I am completely behind this plot development!
Besides what I suggested the last week–which doesn’t seem likely at this point–this idea is the only outcome I can think of that would salvage the past month’s worth of strips.
Sounds like a great idea for a bonus comic.
Y’know I want to put you thru a giant blender about now and give you to drink to the thirsty gang for suggesting sex will fix this >_<;;;
Alej :< Mora :<
sheesh talk about rabid fans just enjoy the story for a change
Ever read Bitter Sweet Candybowl?
Wow, i thought Mora was going to be served a beef-in-the-face sammich in this page, but i am glad she recovered…
Actually i also believe she will summon Digit to actually help Alej.
See how cruel Alej is? The spirit is such a precious thing and she plans to just throw it away. And the people on this site defend all the crap she does. Mora with all her faults know the value of it while Alej us ready to destroy it just for the petty reason that it’s not working for her.Any notice how nice Digit is? That is a reflection of Mora. If Mora was so evil as people seem to think she is Digit wouldn’t be so nice.
I really don’t understand what people want to happen to Mora seeing that she is the hero of the story. End up in poverty and die from a fatal disease or something while Alej dances on her grave? No matter how flawed the good guy is they are still better then the bad guy. No matter how evil Spawn seemed he was still better then a lot of the people in his world. The comments on this site just prove the kind of depraved, unbalanced people their are in this world. They want the cruel,obviously unbalanced person to triumph.Why? Alej hasn’t proven once in this whole comic that she has a a shred of fortitude or good will left in her body.
What Mora did with her mother, her boyfriend, her father, her workers is none of Alej’s concern.Like people cheering on Rachael because she claimed that Mora didn’t deserve Minos. I have never seen anything so bold and ignorant in my life. Just imagine if someone came up to me and told me I don’t deserve to have my girlfriend. I would knock your @$$ flat on the ground.
Well said, good sir. Well said indeed.
I like this comic alot but.I don,t agree with you about coldthorn thou.Mora has worked for her farm.But mora walked out on them.Can you imagaion what coldthorn saw mora mother broken hearted.And lets rember mora mother was like a mother to coldthorn.And I would also like to bring up.The fact she was not blamless for what went down.She admited she did wrong.Seems to me when a person can admit wrong doing.In short life in not black and white.Lord knows I found that out when I moved from home.The world is not that simple.She didn,t mess up moras mothers grave no she stoped it.Shes not an angle she not a villian such as darkseid.Its just when mora left it hurt her very much.I think there is still good in her some where.Mora got to help her get pass all that anger.Well thats my 2 cents worth.
Maybe you’re right…..But the way i look at it…As bitchy Mora is or was….With Digit’s help she’s learning to be better.. She still has a long way to go but she’s getting there.It just takes time..Rome wasn’t built in a day.
Maybe Mora can help Alej…..But she’s might her work cut out for her if she decides to help.
Alej may look like a hopeless cause.. but there’s always hope.
We’ll have to wait and see.
“So now I’m INSANE, Mr. Al?”
“Yes, yes you are…”
Frankly I’m a little disappointed… I wanted to see if Alej could hit such a small target with her gunshot.
Agreed, if only because I’m sure that’s about the only thing that would get Ambar off of her ass to actually come and give aid to Alej for once.
Ahhhhh their ears are so cute!!!
Making up after a huge fight with whom you had considered your best friend in the past is hard =<
Especially if there's so much built up resentment and negativity…
Can't wait to see how it developes!! <3
It's also interesting reading the reactions the readers have here to your work, you've built your characters and story quite well to incite such reactions and comments xD Kudos!!
Wouldn’t say there making up just yet…
Healing n mending a “damaged” friendship does NOT happen over night steps n events need to be taken for it to “flourish” (spl?) and for reconciliation.n to mutually work together to see this through IMO
Yak away people,you think you have it all figured out but this is only the first step on their journey through life. Stay tuned for more.
I have to admit that are many moments where it seems that Mora does have a decent head on her shoulders and a good heart too. Hopefully Digit (and everyone else) will continue to be a good influence in Mora’s life, and I hope Alej has that same opportunity as well. I still feel bad for Alej more than Mora, it really does seem that Ambar is insulting Alej and instead supports Mora more. I know she isn’t really but nevertheless seems that way, and I’d go looney too.
I don’t think Amber insults Alej at all. She gave her the spirit probably hoping that she would understand the preciousness of what she gave her. She realizes that Alej takes herself way too seriously. She couldn’t even relax when she went to the resort.When she helped Mora she realized that she was a struggling farm and probably didn’t want her to fall apart. People do that all the time. They see that your potential and help you out. People act as if that’s cheating. She probably helps Alej all the time and she just doesn’t appreciate it.I am sure she invited Alej personally to the resort to have fun and she couldn’t even do that.Notice she never treated Mora as if she was a high level business woman but as a up and coming one.
I want to agree but you can’t use BATB to back it up since it is non-canon.
As I said before, I realize that it is not Amber’s intention to play “favorites”, but Mora needs to learn to handle herself on her own like Alej did before with her business. There have been many times where there has been a crisis that Alej had to struggle with herself and manage to prevail. I doubt, however, that people in reality try to treat others with fairness and try to bring out potential. In the end, people look out for their own affairs and that’s the (pessimistic) view of reality. And it’s also hard to SEE Amber’s motives and assistance with Alej as the audience right now. I’m just saying I hope that both of them, Mora and Alej, become better people and find balance in the end. I hope that Amber’s gift does teach Alej those values as you mentioned before.
Again, not to be stupid but what does “BATB” mean?
That isn’t true, she and Toot tried to have fun but got rudely interrupted with there guy napping.
BATB is Breast are the Best and I’m trying to tell he can’t use that as evidence since it is non-canon
I wonder how alejandra will react on the next page when she’ll reply on mora saying no?
There we go mora lay down the law tell patches she’s wrong no more of alej in the spotlight show how she abused the child
Alej did and WOULD SERIOUSLY abuse that child. Honestly. Alej was going to step on or shoot that stone! In this page, Mora is 100% right to intervene. Alej is an abused turned abuser. And, no, they are not “equally messed up” regardless of what the poll says. Has Mora made mistakes? Absolutely. Is she a saint? No. Has she ever gone and after Alej with heavy industrial equipment, workers who tried to assault her physically and sexually, or planted explosives around her property? HELL NO!
Alej has done all these things and more to Mora. Remember that. There is no way anyone can justify Alej’s behavior without being on some serious drugs.
Hmm….After reading this comic for a while and then reading the comments I think I’ve come to a conclusion. I don’t see any Mary Sues here. While, yes, Mora does seem have gotten everything and gone no where but up, but I believe there’s a bigger picture here. In real life not every thing balances out the way we expect or want them to. Many times we see assholes of whom, for years, get what they want and seem to have nothing negative come their way. And yet….we don’t see the other side of things. Mora started off working hard, then she found help of which she abused. Remember, that while she did do some terrible stuff she did get some negativity her way for it. She nearly lost Minos, got her ass handed to her, and nearly lost her “child”. Even after everything that transpired Mora still allowed every one to stay at her farm, under her roof, and by their own free will in the end. We see her grow slowly, but surely. There is also the fact that we as the readers don’t really know how truly damaged mora is. It could be what happened in the past messed her up big time. Often, many people take the wrong route in life and make a lot of horrible choices because of how hurt they are and their willingness to try and hide it.
The same can very well be said about Alejandra. To me, both are equally messed up and both have equally made mistakes. At the moment it’s Alejandra’s time to get the kick in the ass. She’s worked hard for what she has, but a lot of it has been received through less than honest means. She has no issue using people, or working their weaknesses to her advantage. In her case it just seems more business like.
Here’s a few questions. Why is Mora so adamant about getting her farm running again? (Remember when she felt guilt about using her mother’s dress in order to persuade Minos? She promised to earn the right to wear that dress again.) What are Alejandra’s motivations for making her own industry better than Mora’s?
While Mora seems to have everything handed to her, it could be a part of a bigger lesson for Alejandra.
To me, I think the real lesson has yet to come for both of them since they seem to drown in their flaws and yet are so alike it’s scary.
That’s just me though.
*applauds* Well said. I agree with that notion.
On another note, rarely have I seen a comic that could rouse the readers into discussion like this. I love the art, story, and character development. Well done!
Btw to those calling the characters mary-sues. If you’re going to so blatantly insult the writer of the comic then it may be best not to comment at all and move on. Calling a character you have barely gotten to know a Sue is a HUGE insult within the art/writing community. I challenge you to write, draw, color, line, publish, edit, pay for, and maintain a website with as much grace as Las Lindas, then see how you feel about your brain children being picked apart so cruelly after so much effort and time. It’s a very hurtful term to use against some one.
It’s getting predictable though. Like I said before – Alej rants, Mora gives sagely wisdom, possible catfight that Mora will win, Alej either joins Mora or goes back to being the evil CEO.
If its so predictable…then why do you continue to visit the comic? You are proving RoslynDrey right with that sort of remark(which she is right).
@Katsohjn: Because I’m more interested in Miles. So what all he does in this story plus LC.
Save her Mora! Save Alej from her dark side!
alright, now kiss and make up girls…
Alej feels that she’s wasting her life.
I only came here because I sometimes visualize me banging a cow like Alej or Mora. So hot! Might get a cow and do them.
Face, meet palm. Hi, palm, nice to make your acquaintance.
And then they have hot make-up sex ;-D
I’m still curious what Alej’s spirit could look like, if it ever finally awakens! Come on Alej!!!! Get better and become a better character!!!
Seems like things could be progressing as quickly as every update, keep up the good work.
I love how people go and call Mora a Mary-Sue. Come on.
Seems perfect my size 9 foot. Something tells me Ambar had something to do with all the good things that happened to Mora one way or another. Nobody gets a lucky streak as much as she did up ’til the pageant. Something tells me that she did that to Alej to teach her a lesson, and try to reconcile Alej and Mora at the pageant, but things didn’t go as planned so now this is one of the possible results.
She’s not the Crest of Wisdom for nothing. I think her calculating character planned for something like this.
finally mora takes steps to fix a mess she left behind. won’t be that easy to take care of, however. it still leaves the question about the company alejandra used to control.
People just don’t get it do they. Mora had no obligation to stay behind and help Alej do anything. Alej was not related to her, she wasn’t her sister,Diana wasn’t her mother.Mora didn’t even have to accept her as part of her family. Alej made a mess of her own life. Mora didn’t tell her to end up this way. If one event like this in your life causes you to spiral downwards it’s your own fault and no one else’s.Did anyone here ever watch ‘Meet the Robinsons’? The boy allowed one disappointing result of a baseball game ruin his life. He could have gotten over it. He could have had friends. He could have gotten adopted to nice family and left the orphanage. But instead he choose to blame the boy who kept him up late that night and let his life be ruined and pointless. What was the point of building an Empire and rising to the top when you are going to fall apart at the slightest nudge in the wrong direction? I thought Alej was supposed to have gained strength from the things that happened in her life, not instability.
How can a person who writes so much be that wrong? Oh well, I guess more field for mistakes
Mora and Alej WERE sisters, and Diana WAS Alej’s mother. Blood-relation is secondary thing.
Alej’s so messed up right now because of Mora. Not that Mora wanted it, but she DID fuck over Coldthorn’s life by her abandonment. Patches really could get over it, but she was just too close to Mora to be completely wrecked by that event
Now stop pulling out minor facts and ignoring other stuff to find reasons to just hate Alej more
@tantrumspiral Quote “Now stop pulling out minor facts and ignoring other stuff to find reasons to just hate Alej more”
As if people dont do this when discussing Mora?
This conflict reminds me of a song…
Buffalo Springfield – For What Its Worth
Given what I’ve read and heard so far they are both at fault. Mora for being arrogant and leaving, I would say is part of the Dark Path both have taken. Patches followed this Darkness by letting it seethe inside of her and corrupting her. Though I do suppose this was inevitable seeing that she always followed Mora no matter what path. Seeing now that Mora is following a Lighter path, this one can only hope that once again Patches will follow her, this Time into the Light.
seth you do realize not 10 pages ago she said she went to find her dad right, it wasn’t over arrogance
@ tantrumspiral. Oh come on. So Mora leaving turned Alej to the darkside? You sound like Batman’s villains always trying to blame their shortcomings on Batman. That if he didn’t do this or that they wouldn’t be as bad as they were.
You ever heard the saying ‘who can make you angry or upset controls you?’Alej allowed Mora’s mistakes to ruin her life just like the guy I talked about in Meet the Robinsins. The boy kept his friend up and made him miss an important catch in a baseball game. He spent years angry about that one event and wasted his life being angry at his friend when he could have moved on. Alej is the unstable one here. Mora had her reasons for leaving to find her Dad. Alej is the one that couldn’t handle it.
She could have gotten new friends,got married, made peace with her Dad, talked to Randal about it, be satisfied that she made so much and has her own company. But she chose instead to be an anti-social, cruel, friendless business shark that stepped on everyone’s heads to get what she wanted and STILL trying to be better then Mora despite her not having anything left not even HER mother.Notice Randal never blamed her for going to find her father and even he thinks Alej has gone too far. She is trying to destroy the only place that felt like home to her and nearly destroyed Diana’s grave in the process.Like I have said before there is a reason why Mora has friends, a spirit and well wishers and Alej doesn’t. She is the villain despite how much you feel sorry for her.I felt sorry for Harley Quinn all the time for what she became but that didn’t change the fact that all the things she did were bad.
Everything you say is true. Alej is a very long multiple years and on going hissy fit, but I think Mora doesn’t go without some blame. They were really close at one point. If Mora had explained why she had left sooner or even before she left in the first place. You say Alej shouldn’t let what she did affect her so much inthr first place but Mora was like like family to her and the actions of those whom you consider family affect you the most. Besides Mora is pretty messed up too..thinking Alej was this mad over some stupid boy from high school and also Mora can be a bitch to all those around her as well…she treats Minos like crap and like he’s just a aex thing at times..used Miles ( granted he was and still might be more of an ass than both Alej and Mora combined and he kinda deserved it)..and attacked Rachael for the whole thing that happened with Minos even though Minos was responsible for that ( but he only did it because Mora didn’t respect him though it was still wrong)…so basically they are both pretty messed up..Alej shouldn’t be obsessed with trying to bring down Mora and Mora should be more aware of her actions and how they affect people…Alej is in a pretty dark place and for a while due to her own actions didn’t have anyone to snap her out of her crazed behavior (tootsie doesn’t count because even thought she was Alej’s friend she doesn’t know the back story of those two and she has up until now basically acting as an enabler for Alej so as a character she hasn’t really been able to develop much…but Mora has had many people join her and help her and yet even though she has befriended most of them she still doesn’t seem to get it completely and comes off as a dim witted hurtful idiot at times..the only person I think she truly appreciates and treats with respect is Digit
I never said Mora wasn’t without her flaws but I disagree with several things you said. Rachael was at fault for what she did because she thought that Mora didn’t deserve him which is extremely judgmental for someone who practically kidnapped Sarah just because she didn’t want her to be taken a way from her. Also presumptuous to believe that Mora didn’t deserve Minos. That was none of her business. The lover’s quarrel Minos and Mora had was not an excuse for her to horn in no matter how you look at it. Also she has befriended most of them and it’s only Rachael and Miles who don’t because they are a bunch of ungrateful schemers. She could have easily just thrown them back out on the street, not to mention that she is their boss and they spend more time trying to avoid work and think of ways to defy her then doing any actual work Notice Minos, Randal,Sarah and Taffy get along just fine with Mora. Finally like I said before Alej had no right to judge Mora for leaving to find her Dad. It was her real family not Alej’s. She had a father that she didn’t even acknowledge and no one ever brings that up when judging Mora.You can spin it all you like. Alej let her life turn to $hit and only uses what Mora did as an excuse for her condition. Batman’s villains do it all the time. They take a single moment in life aand blame it on all their shortcomings. It’s not Mora’s fault Alej was weak.
Heh. A pity I didnt work up the nerve to read this last week. But hey. Mora’s got a point. Dont kill what you dont know shit about.
Why does this feel out-of-character for Mora?
Maybe it’s just character development.
I’m so glad someone’s standing up for Mora for once. x___X; all I kept saying was how ‘right’ Rachel was, but there’s rarely a good reason to cheat.
Mora was the victim in that scenario.
Everyone seems to focus on everything negative that both sides let’s talk about the good each party did.
Mora kept Rachael employed despite trying to steal from Mora and tried to steal Minos. Mora didn’t kick Sarah out even when she tried to steal from Mora twice and almost killing Digit. Helping Taffy, although unsuccessfully, with her date (not the one with Randal). Helping with Sarah’s birthday celebration. Apologizing to Minos for how she acted towards him. And trying to make up with Alej at the festival.
Good things Alej has done. I got nothing.
Okay lets look at this way and hopefully stop the arguing. Mora and Alej both have faults. But Mora at least tries to do good things even when she sometimes messes them up or fails miserably. Alej I think from what I have seen from reading the comics wants to be good. Her niceness and her innocence is still there somewhere and I think that if she tried harder she could actually be a fun, sociable person. If she would just let go the bitterness and the anger she could be that way. I could see Mora and Alej being friends again.They are two halves of the same whole and they don’t even realize it.I can even see Digit and Alej’s spirits being pals as well.
I come to this site for the comic, but lately I find myself reading more and more comments about how flawed this character is and that character is. Honestly, I could break into a rant about you guys, but after sitting here and thinking about it, I think Chalo has you guys eating out of his hands.
Ultimately though this isn’t about who’s in the right, and who’s in the wrong. It’s a story, and if it gets you thinking and even somewhat attached to the characters, then the writer has done their job and struck the right set of cords. So I say: Sit back and enjoy.
I with you…..Just agree to disagree and move on gang.
Try to enjoy the story.
I´m genuinely curious to hear how Chalo been doing anything that could be making folks eating out of his hand, not saying Chalo is a bad story writer, but not seeing signs of being that kind of a mastermind about it
So please, elaborate
I giggled like a schoolgirl at that, remmus. Chalo, a diabolical mastermind playing us for something? You’re silly. It’s a comic, we’re attached enough to it to argue about it. We’ve “eaten the story up”, if you need it worded differently. Just remember which hand fed it to us. ^_^
To put it simple….. Chalo is a fantastic writer to get folks work up every week over their favorite (Or not so favorite..) characters
i don’t think Darkmune was insulting him.
@ lonlonman: I wouldn´t say character that creates silly debates to be fantastic writing, if anything that to me is a minus score for Chalo.
@Neku: judging by the debating back and forth it feels like a 50/50 eating up/spitting out the story.
That’s just people being people. When you have a difference in opinion, conflict is born. If you’d rather characters be two dimensional, predictable, and leave no trace of realistic variations in personality that help MAKE these different opinions, go ahead. You won’t often find those kinds of stories in book clubs or characters under their discussions, though.
If you feel so poorly about it….why read it?
now for a steamy kiss and makeup session
Hey chalo if you where to make this into an animated show.Who would you have doing the voices of the cast?This is just something I have been thinking.
I hope I didn’t insult anyone, I’ve read the whole comic from page 1 till now after I first found out about it, and while some things may not make sense, I get the feeling it’s all leading up to something.
Nah…. You’re O.K.^^
honestly there is no real good way to vote on this, there is not enough back story to understand alej’s point of view while this may seem to be more sided with mora, there maybe more to it on alej’s point but both are pretty messed up in the head at the moment . mora haveing a derp moment as alej goes pretty much bonkers. so knowing all of this i would say hold the vote pole until there is a bit more story for alej.
i won’t add a debate to this but i will say that both characters are awesome although ive seen little to anything of alje being dead set on taking mora down so im finding it kind of hard to feel sympathy but im loving the story anyway and has been for years keep it up man
why does it say im mike i clearly didn’t type that as my name
HAH i’m loving the comments. the debates, the clashing of opinions. these are signs of a good story. i’m going to read the whole thing again so i can get reaquanted with the characters for the debates.
When are the new comics coming out???
Like BB, DD, and the main LL??????????????????????????
Chalo is working on the BB page, it should be up this weekened, hopefully. DD has no pages owed, because it needs $60 more for that. LL will update on Wednesday, hopefully.
im not sure when they come out i just check daily and on different days it comes up
eventually i can totally wait any amount of days for artwork this good
I have followed LL since the start, I love everything about the characters and the story. At first the story didn’t grip me like it does now and you can see the evolution of Chalo and his art in everything done here. I rarely check the comments any more because someone will always complain about something, but this time I felt the need to just speak. In the end unless you’re in the room when Chalo talks about his stuff you have no idea where it’s going to go, I tend to think of it like a roller coaster…You’ll have ups and downs, excitement and twists. But even you can’t see every inch of track ahead, so sit back, put your hands up and enjoy the ride
You should throw some of those canceled comics back up they were good, would have mode money slower than the other ones but they would have still made money.
Calm Down!!! It obviously needs time, jeez!
Red you don’t understand what that is do you?
It’s like telling a pregnant woman to give birth already it just doesn’t happen that way
Can’t really force it to activate
She is a Mary Sue
However, the last few pages have been having all that for a reason, so who knows? Could lead to some undiscovered depths for her character
I will give you Ambar’s involvement, but Chalo followed the rules of his own world in Making Mora. A Mary Sue is one that does not. If Mora could get away with anything without repercussion, if she could treat people how she wanted to and not worry, if she could drink herself into a stupor all the time and still keep the place, then yes, she would be a Mary Sue.
However, Mora almost lost Minos, almost lost her farm, almost lost a lot. She kept going, and trying to fix things in her life. Mora, if Mora were real, would be the last person to say she’s perfect, but this shows she is at least aware of her faults, and is willing to correct them.
Renadt, a Mary Sue can still follow the rules of their world. She has pretty much no development in her character. There are examples of a Mary Sue going through hardship then ending up on top (Can you say, “Bella from Twilight when she lost Edward”?)
It does seem to be taking the piss with its appearance. Granted, it responds to love (How cliché), so with Alej it isn’t going to appear anytime soon, as the whole “You need to feel love, you cold hearted character!” is going to be played with for chapters to come no doubt. It would still be nice to see it at least stir.